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Like a Glove WIP by ShadedCorners Like a Glove WIP by ShadedCorners
René. Being unusually badass.

You wouldn't know she's a goofy and naive young lady.

But actually, I felt bad that I doodle Amadeo and all of his "I'm so gorgeous lolz"-ness, so I wanted to draw René looking epic. Also, I wanted to practice her hair... for some reason, it also gives me troubles in the comic :stare:

I am going to finish this, though (ink it and stuff) and maybe make it the new Chapter 1 cover, since the current is a big ball of "mehhhhhh" fav.me/d6ss8ar

Are her arms too short? I can't tell... her shoulders are raised slightly, but it seems like her arms are too short........... hmmmmmmm......

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SleepyIguana Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist

Ooo, she looks so awesome. And epic, especially with her hair laying that way.

 

I know people already commented about her arms (since you asked)... So I won't say anything. x3

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ShadedCorners Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:D Thank you! 

(And I never revised it XD I should do that!)
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SleepyIguana Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist

:D

 

(XD Ah. Maybe.)

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cloudlakes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the pose and the serious look on her face. (Hair is just tough in general.  It looks all harmless, but it beats me up as I draw it lately.)

I put my arms by my sides to compare and her hands would fall in the right spot by her thighs.  So it's not arm length.  My suspicion is that the top of her arm near her shoulder might need to be a bit thicker/wider.  (It is on me by quite a bit, but I'm on the chubby side - not muscular like her.)  Or trimming down the back/shoulder.  It's large compared to her arm.  I'm not sure if those are the ticket, but they're what I think I see.  Have you tried looking in the mirror at a similar pose?
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ShadedCorners Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I took a break from this for a while, and after coming back to it, I think you might be right. I'm gonna go over it with some basic skeletal structure later, and I think that will help me fix some problems. :D

Thaaanks!

(I did look at myself in the mirror once, but I was all bundled up in a hoodie because of the cold, so I couldn't really see the form XD )
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cloudlakes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good for you.  You'll get it!
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Artemiche Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Arms and head , ok, but torso to large...

Or

Torso, ok, but hard and arms to small!
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ShadedCorners Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Hm, I think you're right :D
Thanks for the tip!
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EckwOOd Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks as though she's warming up for a fight
the right arm looks slightly off, but maybe that's just me
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ShadedCorners Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
True, it does :D

I've decided it's her elbows. Maybe XD
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